Okay so I just started my first story on wattpad, and I’d really like to know what you think of it. You don’t have to read all of it if you don’t want to or don’t have the time – then maybe only the most recent chapters?
Don’t be afraid to give me harsh feedback, I can handle that. Tell me what you think I could improve/change/ etc.
Thanks so much! Also, if you’re on wattpad too, I’d enjoy to check out your stories
Here’s a short summary & the link :
UNDERNEATH THE PERFECTION :
Emma, from an outward glance, always seems to have it all. She’s gorgeous with a rocking body, confident and incredibly likable. She can be a bad-*** hardcore chick when she wants to, or a soft, passionate friend other times.
She’s envied by most because she’s the ultimate female player. No one would dare call Emma a slut.
But all that glitters is – unfortunately – not gold. If you take down the thick walls she’s built around herself to block out any kind of emotions that could develop, you can see that beneath it all – she’s just a vulnerable, scared girl.
Apart from her closest friend, who has to deal with something similar and just as painful, nobody knows how ****** up her life actually is.
Being a teenager is hard enough as it is, but even harder when you have to take care of your little sister, provide money for your parents drug and alcohol addiction and make sure that nobody ever finds out about your personal life.
But what happens when an unexpected and incredibly sexy, bad-*** player comes into the scene? With her life turned upside down, things change for Emma – for better and worse.